::Raider::
This would be a fairly cute pony if it didn’t have all the rainbow vomit on it. It’s got a cute traditional coloring (besides the rainbow eyebleed) that kind of reminds me of Native American style of dress. I just… don’t even… why would you ruin an okay-ish design with rainbows. And what’s even her talent singing the Double-Rainbow song? Why couldn’t they have just left it at a music note… WHY
Oh…sorry for the repeat. Poison looked at his, but it still showed up in the inbox for some reason :|
::Poison::
uh.
UH.
UM.
I don’t know how to react cause this was a submission and I’m not sure if they wanted us to review it or make fun of it so..
..
EITHER WAY IT’S HIDEOUS.
Please excuse my awful anatomy, ponies are hard as shit to drawn. I’ve gotten better over time but I’m still not great.
Here’s a more recent drawing of him.
His name is Final Destination and he’s a literal nightmare. As in, the mythical species of Equine. His talent is for headstone engraving and he works in Bitmarck (Bit + Bismarck) doing this job when the old engraver passed on. Sometimes he also helps out at the crematorium. But he is not a ‘gothic’, ‘emo’, depressed, angry, or bad pony. FD actually is a rather nice stallion despite his job. He works that job because he had a mentor that taught him about jewelry engraving as a colt but Final preferred to work with large slabs of rock instead of small jewelry. So his mentor got him a job eventually, engraving headstones, which he still has today. His wife’s name is Whitehot, and she’s a pegasus. Together they have a pegasus daughter named Read Between The Lines.
Final himself has an appreciation for stone. Because it is in stone, rock, marble, and slate…that he works his magic. It is in these slabs that he writes the final farewells for the dearly departed. So wants others to appreciate such simply complex things like boulders since they can be crafted into such beautiful things, like headstones and statues.
He grew up with loving parents and a sister with physical disabilities. Of course, he treasures everyone in his family and treats them all fairly. Final also has a few good friends in Bitmarck besides his wife.
I made him to be semi-Gary-Stu-ish, so if he seems that way then that was intentional. Ponies aren’t ‘srs bsns’ to me, they’re just a cute hobby.
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::Raider::
I don’t quite remember who this was submitted by, but if you see this on the blog I guess you’ll know. I’m assuming this is a critique, right? Well for starters, I know you kind of intended him to be gary-stu-ish, but if you are like planning to use him as a serious OC some day then I suggest changing his name- and his daughter’s name as well. They’re just too long, and could you imagine calling somepony “Final Destination” or “Read Between the Lines”. Seems to be kind of long and sounds more like book titles.
Other than that, there’s not too much wrong with this pony, at least you didn’t make him like psycho/insane/homicidal or anything, so that’s good.
I know I shouldn’t really be one to talk about drawing ponies, because I draw them in my own style kind of- but here’s a little advice. When drawing the snout, make the spot where the snout meets the base of the forehead dip down kind of, like a concave slope. Hope I could help, I think this is actually a good OC, he just needs some touch-ups. c:
::Raider::
This thing’s hair looks like Rainbow Dash, I really hope this is in no way related to Rainbow Dash…please don’t bring Dash into this…pls
I’m pretty sure this thing was a joke… it’s from somebody’s game walkthrough videos or something like that from what I can tell in the description… but… WHY DASH? OF ALL THE HAIRSTYLES THEY COULD’VE YANKED FROM
Name: Softheart
Species: Pegasus
Cutie Mark: A heart with a plaster over one side
Gender: Female
Personality: Calm and collected. She’s patient and will listen to anyponies problem no matter how trivial. Generally very positive.
Born blind this pegasi can’t safely fly but that doesn’t get her down, she’s a councillor by profession and a shoulder to cry on by hobby. She loves to take naps and can often be found flat out under a tree in the middle of the day. Softheart is very independent and doesn’t accept help easily, especially when it comes to getting around town.
::Raider::
For starters, this pony is freaking adorable! I love how here cutie mark closely relates to her talent. I even guessed that she was a therapist just from seeing it- very well done portraying that part. Also, I find it sweet that she settles everyone’s problems yet she probably has so many of her own what from being blind and all, the poor dear :c
All-in-all she seems like a sweet pony, I could totally picture her just helping all the other ponies out and being that sisterly figure for everyone. However, this might just be me but I don’t think she’d really need to be a pegasus, if she can’t really see where she’s going then I don’t see the point. But, that’s your decision for you to make, if you leave the wings there’s nothing wrong with it c:
Great pony, love it <3
Aagh, I dunno, just wanted to see if my OC was socially acceptable!
And yes, lots of red
P.S: He’s insane, or gerning, not sure
::Raider:::
So far, he looks like a rather interesting OC. However, I think the whole “insane” thing is really common among people’s OC’s. It seems like almost everypony has a whacko in the bunch.
Otherwise, he seems to have quite an interesting design, and I like the colors. You don’t often see very many red ponies (or even ones with a normal hair color for that matter). And I absolutely love the fez he’s wearing btw.
Overall, a great drawing and the character seems to be okay. I’d like to see more details on him though :)
::nexus::
My third pony OC, a mare that represents one of my favorite candies, Reese’s Pieces. HETEROCHROMIA FTW
I don’t get it. Is it supposed to be good at making Reese’s Pieces or is she a Gijinka of Reese’s Pieces? Is her element Reese’s Pieces? Or was her parents Reese’s Pieces? Or does she represent the owner’s obsession for Reese’s Pieces?
…
IT JUST MAKES NO SENSE.
Also, Heterochromia is not cool to put in your OC. It’s kind of mary-sue and overused. I have heterochromia myself. It’s not fun. :O Also, she looks like Applejack. And what kind of cutie mark consists of just dots?
::Poison::
ANOTHER SUBMISSION AND JUST….
IT SMELLS OF SHIT.
SO MUCH SHIT.
(Picture by Vector, he’s the best.)
This is Needles. Her full name is Needles N. Threads, but she is not into fashion, so she goes by Needles. She is a puzzlemaker, and also the author of a few riddle books. She lives in Manehatten, along with her older roomate Windup, who makes machines. She loves challenging her mind, and always loves to hear stories. Needles is like an adorable puppy, cute, sweet, and playful. Except her definition of “play” is tackling somepony and biting their ears with her strangely big, triangular teeth. She is often risky, and makes up her plans on the fly. Her cutie mark represents her different way of thinking then most ponies. It’s the way she seems the world, upside down. Though she is a unicorn, she can barely do any magic besides basic levitation, but that’s really all she needs for her line of work. She is very young, at the pony age equal to a 16 year old human. (Hence why she lives with a roomate, he’s older and can actually own an apartment.) Her mother was a streamstress, hence the weird name. Her coat is lime green with a red sploch (which she dyed on by accident), and her mane is a maroon red. She works very hard to gel her mane everyday, and is very proud of it.
::Poison::
Another oc review submission! WOOT.
I actually loveloveloveloveLOVE this design. XD The mane and tail especially!! I think she sounds like a very fun loving and cute pony. c:
I’d love to hear more about her background though, it seems she might have quite a tale. X3
OFFICIAL DESCRIPTION-
PLS COMENT ND FAV
ok so this is my mlp caracter
her name is SceneSparkle DiamondGlitter
i luv her already n.n shes so kawaaiiii desuuu and cuuuteeeee
best charactr i hav evr made
SHE IS MINE NO STEALIGN OR ESLE >:3
creatd by me
::Poison::
Submitted.
… Please.. no more scene ponies.
IT HURTS.
